• Hi all. At the link below there's an animatic for a video I'm working on. https://app.wipster.io/Review/Cfb_GQBez20v7a9jMIysUMf-YFk4X7BNajUOhzar39pvf_kDew I'm looking for feedback. If you have the time and inclination to give it, I'm especially interested in hearing about: * Any moments where it's not clear how the imagery relates to the script, or where it's not clear what the imagery is depicting. * Any small problems in the script that could be improved. Pacing. Were there any parts that moved too quickly or too slowly? Naturally, much of this animatic doesn't represent what the final animation will be like. I hope you can look past that. Especially please try to hear past my congested voice! I've found a fantastic new narrator for this one that I'm excited to work with. You'll notice that the content overlaps with previous work I've done, but I believe the way it's framed here is a valuable addition to what I've done so far. I hope you agree. You can leave time-linked comments directly within Wipster by clicking on the video frame and typing. Or you can reply to this post if you prefer. NB. Please don't share this URL with the broader world. It'll be available only temporarily. As ever, for ways you can support my work see: https://blog.georgeoughttohelp.com/donate/ Thanks! Tomasz